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Agricultural land become less productive for degradation

Agricultural land become less productive for degradation Pk2lK

The diagram showing the reason of cultivating land being unproductive because of deforestation, over-grazing, over-cultivation and few other reasons. The data showing here talks about the time around 1990's from three different parts of the world. Along with the land degradation reasons, the author mentioned specifically three crucial regions which has been affted massively. Europe is the most affected region and North America is in number three. Although the difference is huge, but the degdration happend for different causes. Over-grazing is one of the important reasons behind these issue. As Ocenia is not focused on cultivation, so animals food supply played crucial role here for massive degradation. They use the same land for producing peddy and the rest part is being used fir animal food. Around 11. 3 percent of the land is being unproductive because of over-grazing. The other two major reasons of land being infertile are deforestation and over-ciltivation. As the land is not enough for production, people use the same land again and again which leads to unfruitful results. For other purposes like sheltering or housing, people are cutting down the tress and taking us to the roads of decreasing land for producting crops. The scenario is same for all over the word, not only specifically for those region mentioned into the text.

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