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The graph depicts the percentage of growth in revenue and monthly performance of a leading chain of health club for 2015.

The graph depicts the percentage of growth in revenue and monthly performance of a leading chain of health club for 2015. VBDRm

The graph depicts the percentage of growth in revenue and monthly performance of a leading chain of health club for 2015. First of all, a noticeable fluctuation in the rate of growth of sales was seen between February and July, where the rate reached the spike of 13% but suddenly saw a dip to 3% for the month of June and went down to 0% in the next month. From the month of august onwards, the sales went increasing, although a minor decrease of 1% in September, and at the end of the year, the growth went above 13%. Furthermore, the monthly performance went increasing till the end of the year, with some spikes in the month of June and December. The trend also rose linearly. Overall, the leading chain saw an increment in the rate of growth of sales while the performance and trend have also grown at the same pace.

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 in revenue and monthly performance of a leading chain of health club for 2015.

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