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graph shows Radio and television audience in UK

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The line graph illustrates the number of people in British who watched TV and listened Radio between October and December in 1992. While the figure for audience fluctuated over the period shown, it is clear that the television had the highest number of people overall. Radio, on the other hand, had the lowest number of audiences in the period. As can be seen from the graph, the most people listened the radio had the highest number of almost 5% in the morning at 6am shown on the chart, and there was dramatically increase between 6am to 9am approximately 29%. While the period between 9 am to 6 Midnight was the most decrease. In contrast to the figure of the people watched television, steadily fluctuation between 6am to 2pm reaching a peak of about 17%. After that, there was rocketed percentage almost 49%. Then was sharply declined approximately 5% in the period between 8: 00 to midnight. In addition, people watching TV and listening radio stayed at almost 5% between 2: 00 to 6: 00 midnight.

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 of audiences in the period.

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