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The graph demonstrates the changes in average food consumption between 2010 and 2016.

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The graph demonstrates the changes in average food consumption between 2010 and 2016. 2In general, the amount of pizza consumed increased significantly while the amount of soda drunk declined. 3While the amount of pizza eaten increased steadily over the whole period, the amount of soda drunk remained stable for 3 years and then declined between 2013 and 2016. There was little change in the quantity of bread and organic food eaten over the whole period. 5The main difference was that the amount of 1 organic food rose slowly between 2010 and 2013 before falling again to the original level, whereas the quantity of bread rose and fell over the whole period. Overall, while the amount of organic food and bread consumed remained about the same over the period, the amount of pizza eaten increased significantly and the amount of soda drunk decreased.
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