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News access in Canada and Australia

News access in Canada and Australia 11W1M
The pie charts illustrate the principal ways of accessing news in Canada and Australia. In Canada, the most prominent source is TV, in Australia, it is from an online source. We can see that in both the pie charts, the bottom three sources show a similar pattern. TV usage in Canada is maximum at 40%, followed by Online sources at 36%. In contrast in Australia, these two resources swap the position, Online sources being maximum at 52% followed by TV at 37%. One major difference between Canada and Australia is that over twice as many people read the news in print in the former, compared with the latter. The figures are 14% and 7% respectively. Similarly, listening to the news on the radio is preferred by three times more people in Canada than in Australia.
The pie charts illustrate the principal ways of accessing news in Canada and Australia.

In Canada, the most prominent
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is TV, in Australia, it is from an online
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. We can
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that in both the pie charts, the bottom three
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a similar pattern.

TV usage in Canada is maximum at 40%, followed by Online
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at 36%. In
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in Australia, these two resources swap the position, Online
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being maximum at 52% followed by TV at 37%.

One major difference between Canada and Australia is that over twice as
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read the news in print in the former, compared with the latter. The figures are 14% and 7%
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in Canada than in Australia.
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IELTS academic News access in Canada and Australia

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4 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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