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The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000.

The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. DXj6

An inspection of the data in the line graph reveals the number of males and females smoking per 1000 people in Someland during a 40-year period from 1960 to 2000. From the overall perspective, it can be clearly observed that the rate of smoking among two sexes had been declining throughout the timeframe. The most notable point is that there were a far fewer women having a habit of smoking rather than men. To begin with, having rated at 600 people per 1000 in 1960, the quantity of smoking men slightly decreased to about 580 people in 1980. However, it is noted that then there has been a dramatic fall in this trend by approximately 320 people to 240 people per 1000 people by the end of the given period, with an insignificant rise in 1990. With respect to the number of women smoking, initially, it comprised only one tenth of people in 1960. Having risen excessively by about 200 people and reaching a peak of just over 300 people in 1975, the figures for females subsequently decreased gradually during the following 25 years and finally, reached 200 people in 2000, which was slightly less than figures for males.

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