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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 3Xrd
The given line graph provides us analytics on three companies and the amounts of garbage produced by them over the past fifteen years, from 2000 to 2015. The waste generated by the companies has been recorded in tonnes. Company A, which is represented by the blue line, used to generate the most amount of waste compared to any other company at 12 tonnes of waste produced in the year 2000. Although, the amount of waste produced by this company has been on a steady decline over the years; dropping to 9 tonnes of waste produced in year 2010, dropping even furthur to about 8 tonnes in the year 2015. Company B represented by the green line, generated the second highest amount of waste in the year 2000 at about 8 tonnes. This company saw a short increase in waste production between years 2000 and 2005, however it has been on a sharp decline ever since. Company C is the used to produce the least amount of waste at the beginning of the decade at only a little higher than 3 tonnes of waste produced. Sadly though, their's is the only company which steadily increased the amount of waste it produces. We can clearly ascertan that all companies have had an overall decrease in waste production over the years, company C being the notable outlier as it is the only company whose waste generation has increased, with more than 9 tonnes of waste produced in the latest year.
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produced
by them over the past fifteen years, from 2000 to 2015. The
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compared to any other
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company
at 12 tonnes of
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waste
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produced
in the
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2000. Although, the
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waste
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by this
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company
has been on a steady decline over the years; dropping to 9 tonnes of
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waste
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in
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2010, dropping even
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to about 8 tonnes in the
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2015.

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Company
B represented by the green line, generated the second highest
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2000 at about 8 tonnes. This
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production between years 2000 and 2005,
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C is the
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it produces.

We can
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ascertan
that all
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companies
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waste
production over the years,
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C being the notable outlier as it is the
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whose
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generation has increased, with more than 9 tonnes of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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