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The graph compares the earnings of men and women including graduates and Non-graduates on a weekly basis. And we can generally observe that even non-graduate men are more likely to earn more than women

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The graph compares the earnings of men and women including graduates and Non-graduates on a weekly basis. And we can generally observe that even non-graduate men are more likely to earn more than women(both graduates and non-graduates). For every age group and irrespective of gender, we can see that graduates earn more than non-graduates weekly except for the age group of 16-19. In increase in age, the weekly earnings are also increased for graduate men reaching over 700 euros for the age group of 50-59 years and 40-49 years. Though, women graduates earn more than non-graduates of women, their weekly earnings are averaged around only 350euros i. e. , still less than men non-graduates which is averaged approximately at 450 euros. Furthermore, over a period of time women non-graduates earn less with increasing age. Overall, graduate menand women are earning more per week when compared with non-graduates of men and women.
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IELTS academic The graph compares the earnings of men and women including graduates and Non-graduates on a weekly basis. And we can generally observe that even non-graduate men are more likely to earn more than women

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