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The graph compares small, medium and large groups of Australian companies in terms of their use of social media for business reasons from 2012 to 2016.

The graph compares small, medium and large groups of Australian companies in terms of their use of social media for business reasons from 2012 to 2016. G9YDx
The graph compares small, medium and large groups of Australian companies in terms of their use of social media for business reasons from 2012 to 2016. Overall, large companies used social media more than the other groups, although in 2015 the figures fell for all sizes of companies. In 2012, almost 30% of small companies used social media for business purposes. The figure for medium companies was slightly higher at just over 30%, while for larger companies the proportion stood at 80%. The following year, almost half of medium enterprises used social media for business reasons, whereas there was little or no change in the figures for small and large companies. There was little change in the percentages in 2014, although the figure for small companies saw an increase to almost 40%. However, in 2015, there was a decline in the use of social media to 30% by small and medium companies and to 55% by large companies. In contrast, the figures for 2016 increased to 49% and 55% for small and medium companies, respectively. They also increased to 80% for large companies, returning to their levels of 2012 and 2013.
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groups of Australian
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for business reasons from 2012 to 2016.

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more than the other groups, although in 2015

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for business purposes. The

figure for medium
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over 30%, while for larger

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the proportion stood at 80%. The following year, almost half of medium

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for business reasons, whereas there was
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to 30% by
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increased to 80% for
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, returning to their levels of 2012 and 2013.
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