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A glance at the chart provides an overview of the electricity generation and consumption of ten different countries in 2014. It is evident that most of the country has more produced electricity than their consumption except Germany. It can be seen that China has the highest electricity consumed, where Korea has the lowest consumption in the listed country. Their consumption electricity amount is 5322 billion kw and 449. 5 billion kw respectively. The united states have ranked the Second position in the usage and generation that is 3868 billion kw and 4099 billion kw. There is almost equivalence production and consumption by Russia, japan, and India, where the rank is nearest like 3rd, 4th and 5th respectively. These 3 country's production amounts are 1057, 936 and 871 billion kw. Another four countries have consumption between 525 to 650 billion kw. Thus, it is interesting to note that Germany has opposite rate than the other's country in generation and usage. This country usage is higher than its production, where the consumption is 581. 6 and production is 526. 6 billion kw.
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generation and
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of ten
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in 2014. It is evident that most of the
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has more produced
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than their
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except Germany.

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that China has the highest
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consumed, where Korea has the lowest
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in the listed
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. Their
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amount is 5322
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respectively
. The
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have ranked the Second position in the usage and generation
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by Russia, japan, and India, where the rank is
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amounts are 1057, 936 and 871
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in generation and usage.

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usage is higher than its
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, where the
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IELTS academic 10 country electricity consumtion

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