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The graph compares possible oil production capabilities of six Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010.

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The graph compares possible oil production capabilities of six Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010. All in all, Saudi Arabia seems to be the leading oil generating nation as the production levels escalated quicker than the other countries. As per the presentation, the approximate oil producing capacity of Iran in 1990 was nearly 3 million barrels a day. After a decade and a half, this capacity reached 4 million a day. Finally, in 2010, the production improved slightly. In comparison to Iran, the oil generating capability of Iraq looks lower as the stock was roughly 2 million barrels a day in 1990. However, in 2010, the number almost doubled. On the contrary, Kuwait produced less than 2 million barrels a day and the production amount stood at 3. 5 million in the year 2010. Also, throughout the decade, Qatar produced the lowest amount of oil, accounted for nearly 0. 5 million barrels a day. After two decades, the production level remained consistent at the same level. Also, in the United Arab Emirates, the generation showed a similar pattern as compared to Iraq and the production reached nearly 4 million barrels in 2010. Lastly, the oil generating levels of Saudi Arabia seemed to be the highest than other nations. In 1990, it produced more than 8 million barrels a day, which turned out to be approximately four times more than other nations. The daily production also soared to more than 14 million barrels and this was slightly the same as the cumulative oil production of other nations.
The graph compares possible
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capabilities of six Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010. All in all, Saudi Arabia seems to be the leading
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generating
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nation
as the
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levels
escalated quicker than the
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countries.

As per the presentation, the approximate
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producing capacity of Iran in 1990 was
nearly
3
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a day. After a decade and a half, this capacity reached 4
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a day.
Finally
, in 2010, the
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improved
slightly
.
In comparison
to Iran, the
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generating capability of Iraq looks lower as the stock was roughly 2
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a day in 1990.
However
, in 2010, the number almost doubled.
On the contrary
, Kuwait produced less than 2
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a day and the
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amount stood at 3. 5
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in the year 2010.

Also
, throughout the decade, Qatar produced the lowest amount of
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, accounted for
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0. 5
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a day. After two decades, the
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level
remained consistent at the same
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.
Also
, in the United Arab Emirates, the generation
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showed
a similar pattern as compared to Iraq and the
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reached
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4
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in 2010.

Lastly
, the
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generating
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of Saudi Arabia seemed to be the
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than
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. In 1990, it produced more than 8
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a day, which turned out to be approximately four times more than
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. The daily
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also
soared to more than 14
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and this was
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the same as the cumulative
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of
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IELTS academic The graph compares possible oil production capabilities of six Gulf countries from 1990 to 2010.

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