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The graph chart shows the number of people in education in Britain from 1970/71 to 1990/91 and whether they were having full-time or part-time education.

The graph chart shows the number of people in education in Britain from 1970/71 to 1990/91 and whether they were having full-time or part-time education. PWOXK
The graph chart shows the number of people in education in Britain from 1970/71 to 1990/91 and whether they were having full-time or part-time education. Overall, the tendency in growth for both kinds of education is clear on the contemporary part-time education was more popular than full-time through the whole period of time. It is also visible that number for female’s education overrated male’s by 1990/91. At the beginning of the period, there wer over 1000 men who studied and women had less number compared to them. But women’s number was growing steadily and reached a peak in 1990/91 of more than 1200. While numbers of females were increasing in both education systems, male’s numbers for part-time education were decreasing steadily to over 800. Part-time education has been more popular for females than males over the period; however, numbers for man’s became lower than women in the end. Unlike part-time education, which remained popular for all people, and almost doubled its numbers by 1990/91. To sum it up, we can see the growth for both educations. As we see bigger growth in numbers for females in part-time education and higher numbers of men in part-time education.
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was more popular than full-time through the whole period of time. It is
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overrated male’s by 1990/91.

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who studied and women had less
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was growing
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were increasing in both
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for part-time
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were decreasing
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has been more popular for
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than males over the period;
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, and almost doubled its
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by 1990/91.

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. As we
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