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The diagram below shows the stages of producting ketchup.

The diagram below shows the stages of producting ketchup. KGXRR
This diagram shows data about various stages process of manufacturing of tomato ketchup. In general, This process displays a time that from beginning of get tomatoes on the ground until packing ketchup. It is clear to say, The ketchups are being produckting with tomatoes by manufactures, due to this, at the benning of process's first satage, Tomatoes get from ground, the next stages is that a number of tomatoes transported to bring to the firms, as well as, Numerous of tomatoes are washed with in the huge kontain, it can be seen from diagram, there has cleaning and sapareting device product, Thus, At the next process a number of tomatoes sapareted and cleaned by that device. In addition to this, All of them are mixed as well as diluted with dissimilar ingredients, following this, this became to nearly ready product, in order that Manufactures packed the ketchups to jars subsquentualy it became to ready.
This diagram
shows
data about various stages process of manufacturing of tomato ketchup.
In general
, This process displays a time that from beginning of
get
tomatoes on the ground until packing ketchup.

It is
clear
to say, The
ketchups
are being
produckting
with tomatoes by manufactures, due to this, at the
benning
of process's
first
satage
, Tomatoes
get
from ground, the
next
stages is that a number of tomatoes transported to bring to the firms,
as well
as, Numerous of tomatoes
are washed
with in the huge
kontain
, it can be
seen
from diagram, there has cleaning and
sapareting
device product,
Thus
, At the
next
process a number of tomatoes
sapareted
and cleaned by that device.
In addition
to this, All of them
are mixed
as well
as diluted with dissimilar ingredients, following this, this became to
nearly
ready product, in order that Manufactures packed the
ketchups
to jars
subsquentualy
it became to ready.
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