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The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago. summarise information and report main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the US top 10 processed food export markets for last year and six years ago. pJqOa

Within a first glance, it is vividly seen that the dollar credit earned by Canada from processed food export markets last year was highest among all. Comparatively Australia and Hong Kong lands at an equal place in terms of money generated 6 years ago. A slight distinction between China and South Korea is evidently seen according to the stats of income last year as 2. 1 USD and 1. 6 USD respectively. The statistical data of dollars collected by Mexican the European Union is relatively close within a six-year lapse. It is estimated in context of bar graph that the left part of the world has been able to generate 11 USD the previous year which is second highest in the whole graph. Every country has rocketed their earnings last year. The report conveys, Philippines as the third country to earn a good expected amount from the packed food export markets from over six years and the last year. In the encapsulation, it is intriguingly noticed that no other state than Canada could possibly reach the Cliff of the food export business in the same period

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