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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. qb7G
The line graph demonstrates USA consumers’ average annual expenditures on cell phones and residential phones. The phone services time illustrates between 2001 and 2010 with a line graph. Overall, it can be well-observed that residential phone services starting from 2001 had a high expenditure on their phone services. However, cell phone services in 2001 started with low expenditure. Furthermore, in 2006 both phone services have changed their expenditure activity, cell phone services had a skyrocket consumption, although residential phone services had a gradual decrease outlay after 2006. To begin with, residential phone services starting 2001 have over three-quarters expenditure (seven hundred outlay). After 2001 residential phone services had a decrease and in 2006 their consumption was just over a half (over five hundred expenditure). Residential phone services have a gradual decrease to 2010. On the other hand, cell phone services starting 2001 had a tiny fraction expenditure (two hundred outlay) and comparison with residential phone services it can be well-recognized cell phones have more expenditures than residential phone services. In 2006 cell phone services had also the same as residential phone services just over a half (over five hundred expenditures). Cell phone services had a gradual increase to 2010 with well over three quarters (over seven hundred expenditures).
The line graph demonstrates USA consumers’ average annual
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time illustrates between 2001 and 2010 with a line graph.

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starting from 2001 had a high
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had a skyrocket consumption, although
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had a gradual decrease outlay after 2006.

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had a decrease and in 2006 their consumption was
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have a gradual decrease to 2010.

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starting 2001 had a tiny fraction
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(two hundred outlay) and comparison with
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phone
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it can be well-recognized
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have more
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than
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had a gradual increase to 2010 with well
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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