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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. yJD3

The graph depicts the rate figure UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train in this period between 1970 and 2030. Its clear from the graph that people tend to use car the most comparing to other transports. According to what is shown in graph, the number of people who uses car has climbed from six to nine millions during this period. Moreover, bus shows a slightly decrease from 4 to 3 millions. Moving to the final transport, the chart illustrates a low rate start to train in 1970 comparing to the others, however, its rose slightly then remained steady in period between 2000 and 2010, then its shows a high increase from 3 to 5 at the end. To sum up, we could say that the average figure of UK commuters travelling each day by transports has a lot of changes. The average of people using busses has reduced, meanwhile the rate op people who use cars or trains has increased in this period.

The graph depicts the rate figure UK commuters travelling each day by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
, bus or train in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 between 1970 and 2030. Its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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car
 the most comparing to other transports.

According to what is shown
 in graph, the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 has climbed from six to nine millions during this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
. Moreover
, bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
slightly decrease
 from 4 to 3 millions.

Moving to the final transport, the chart illustrates a low rate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to train in 1970 comparing to the others, however
, its rose slightly
 then remained steady in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 between 2000 and 2010, then its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 a high increase from 3 to 5 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

To sum up, we could say that the average figure of UK commuters travelling each day by transports has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

The average of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 using busses has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
, meanwhile the rate op You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 or trains has increased in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
. 