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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. yJD3
The graph depicts the rate figure UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train in this period between 1970 and 2030. Its clear from the graph that people tend to use car the most comparing to other transports. According to what is shown in graph, the number of people who uses car has climbed from six to nine millions during this period. Moreover, bus shows a slightly decrease from 4 to 3 millions. Moving to the final transport, the chart illustrates a low rate start to train in 1970 comparing to the others, however, its rose slightly then remained steady in period between 2000 and 2010, then its shows a high increase from 3 to 5 at the end. To sum up, we could say that the average figure of UK commuters travelling each day by transports has a lot of changes. The average of people using busses has reduced, meanwhile the rate op people who use cars or trains has increased in this period.
The graph depicts the rate figure UK commuters travelling each day by
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car
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between 1970 and 2030. Its
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from the graph that
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people
tend to
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use
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car
the most comparing to other transports.

According to what
is shown
in graph, the number of
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people
who
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uses
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car
has climbed from six to nine millions during this
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period
.
Moreover
, bus
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shows
a
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slightly decrease
from 4 to 3 millions.

Moving to the final transport, the chart illustrates a low rate
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start
to train in 1970 comparing to the others,
however
, its rose
slightly
then remained steady in
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period
between 2000 and 2010, then its
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shows
a high increase from 3 to 5 at the
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end
.

To sum up, we could say that the average figure of UK commuters travelling each day by transports has
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a lot of
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changes
.

The average of
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people
using busses has
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reduced
, meanwhile the rate op
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people
who
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use
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cars
or trains has increased in this
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period
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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5 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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