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The table below gives information about Changes in mode of travel in England between 1985 and 2000

The table below gives information about Changes in mode of travel in England between 1985 and 2000 6RV3
The table clearly presents and compare the mode of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. The given data is average distance in miles travelled by individuals in a year. From the given statistic, car has travelled abundance distance then other mode of transport in 1985, also the top number in 2000 too. Local bus and other mode of transportation have highest number of distance travelled compared to walking and train. The statistics is remarkably low for bicycles, long distance bus, and taxi which is 51, 54, 13 respectively. After 15 years, the number has been increased dramatically for long distance bus and taxi, however bicycle decreased in 41. Local bus, train has increased by small quantity. Meanwhile, walking number has dropped by 17. To recapitulate, the average traveling distance per person has been increased enormously from 1985 to 2000
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presents and compare the mode of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. The
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in miles travelled by individuals in a year.

From the
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then other mode of transport in 1985,
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the top
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in 2000 too. Local bus and other mode of transportation have
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highest
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of
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travelled compared to walking and train. The statistics is
remarkably
low for bicycles, long
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bus, and taxi which is 51, 54, 13
respectively
. After 15 years, the
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has
been increased
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distance
bus and taxi,
however
bicycle decreased in 41. Local bus, train has increased by
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small
quantity. Meanwhile, walking
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has dropped by 17.

To recapitulate, the average traveling
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per person has
been increased
enormously
from 1985 to 2000
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about Changes in mode of travel in England between 1985 and 2000

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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