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The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelian students from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows tourism statistics among Venezuelian students from 2011 to 2014. Ql3G1

The following line graph demonstrates the number of Venezuelan students visiting capitals, such as Paris, London, and Rome during the 3-year period between 2011 and 2014. Overall, London is the only destination which popularity was increasing throughout the considered time. Such destinations like Paris and Rome had unstable growth and falls. The first line to look at is going to be the one about London visitors. The statistic of it was slightly growing up from 2011, when the number of guests was equal to 15000, to 2013 when it was visited by approximately 17000 people. Then starting from 2013 the rise becomes sharper and during 2014 the number reached almost 20000. That's a significant increase in the numbers. The second line represents Paris visitors. If we glance at the beginning of the following line, we will be able to notice that only 10000 students visited Paris at that time. The line was rapidly increasing between 2011 and 2013 to the number of 20000 that is twice as much as it used to be. But from the end of the above-stated range, the line started falling which means that Paris started becoming less popular among students again. The last but not least statistic is about Rome. Actually, this one is the most complicated. It was increasing and decreasing throughout the entire period. From 2011 it significantly fell down from 18000 to 12000, then from 2012 it abruptly increased to 18000 again and the last moving is decreasing to 15000 till 2014. All these statistics compare the popularity of every city that helps us to have a look at the big picture and know exact facts about travelling.

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