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Task 1 Two maps illustrate how to visit the city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Task 1 Two maps illustrate how to visit the city hospital between 2007 and 2010. B7Kx5
Two maps illustrate how to visit the city hospital between 2007 and 2010. In general, there were many big changes in the way to the medical building including destinations, the structure of the road between 2007 and 2010. To be specific, three years later since 2007, instead of constructing junctions and crossroads, two roundabouts were built to connect three roads including City Road, Hospital Road, and Ring Road. The second main change is bus stops which were regrouped and replaced to the West of the Hospital Road with the larger size. In the East of the road, the area was built for a car park for staff and a car park for others was next to the hospital, particularly in the East. The distance between City Road and Hospital remained unchanged. In addition, the position of the hospital had not been unchanged and the area of the building was reduced a little for the roundabout.
Two maps illustrate how to visit the city
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hospital
between 2007 and 2010.

In general
, there were
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many
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big
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changes
in the way to the medical building including destinations, the structure of the
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road
between 2007 and 2010.

To be specific, three years later since 2007,
instead
of constructing junctions and crossroads, two roundabouts
were built
to connect three
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roads
including City
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Road
,
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Hospital
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Road
, and Ring
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Road
. The second main
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change
is bus
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stops
which
were regrouped
and replaced to the West of the
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Hospital
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Road
with the larger size. In the East of the
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road
, the area
was built
for a car park for staff and a car park for others was
next
to the
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hospital
,
particularly
in the East.

The distance between City
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Road
and
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Hospital
remained unchanged.
In addition
, the position of the
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hospital
had not
been unchanged
and the area of the building was
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reduced
a
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little
for the roundabout.

IELTS academic Task 1 Two maps illustrate how to visit the city hospital between 2007 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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