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150 words. Visitors visiting Caribbean

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The graph provides data on the number of sightseers visiting a Caribbean island, over a 7-year-period, starting from 2010. Overall, it can be said that, visitors staying on cruise ships had experienced a dramatic rise and fall for the first few years, but always rose after that certain period, while that of staying on island had experienced it till the end. Nevertheless, the total amount was always increasing. First and foremost, in the year 2010, a quarter of a million tourists stayed on cruise ships, whereas 750, 000 visitors stayed on island and it summed up 1 million that year. The following year, which is 2011, the former one increased to a half million but the latter one remained steady. By adding up it was found one and a quarter in total. The graph of visitors staying on cruise ships had experienced rise and fall between 2010 to 2013 and then rose significantly. On the other hand, visitors staying on island graph remained same in three consecutive years, which is from 2013 to 2015 and then experienced & fall and finally a rise again. The total amount of visitors was ever rising and it rose from 1 million to 3. 5 million in merely 7 years.

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, over a 7-year-period, starting from 2010.

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visitors
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staying
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. Nevertheless
, the total amount was always increasing.

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visitors
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. The following You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
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million
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 the latter one remained steady. By adding up it was found
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visitors
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.

On the other hand
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visitors
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staying
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 graph remained same in three consecutive years, which is from 2013 to 2015 and then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwisematurecapableskillfulveteransophisticated
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 & fall and finally
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 was ever rising and it rose from 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 to 3. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in merely
 7 years. 