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The maps below show Colwik Arts Center in 2005 and now.

The maps below show Colwik Arts Center in 2005 and now. PEEjX
The maps indicate Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and present. We can see that the art center made many transitions. During this period, including new buildings and recreation facilities. In the past, there was two galleries building in the top of the right-hand corner. It was relocated to the left in front of café’, and in addition, it changed to one building in 2005. The snack bar was in the top of the left-hand corner, whereas now meeting room divided into two building and moved there. The concert hall and cinema was in the middle in the center, now there is separated created two buildings, however hall concert to top right-hand corner and cinema next to hall. In their middle of the center created a new exhibition area. The information wasn’t changed. The west land was demolished, what is more in their place the center developed a new recreation with a pond, trees and seating. So, it is clear the art center changed and expanded during this period.
The maps indicate Colwick Arts Center in 2005 and present. We can
see
that the art center made
many
transitions. During this period, including new
buildings
and recreation facilities.

In the past,
there was two galleries
building
in the top of the right-hand corner. It
was relocated
to the
left
in front of café’, and
in addition
, it
changed
to one
building
in 2005. The snack bar was in the top of the
left
-hand corner, whereas
now
meeting room divided into two
building
and
moved
there. The concert hall and cinema was in the middle in the center,
now
there
is separated
created two
buildings
,
however
hall concert to top right-hand corner and cinema
next
to hall. In their middle of the center created a new exhibition area. The information wasn’t
changed
. The west land
was demolished
,
what is more
in their place the center developed a new recreation with a pond, trees and seating.

So
, it is
clear
the art center
changed
and expanded during this period.
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