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The diagram highlight about the water cycle. Summarize the information

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he chart illustrates the circulation of water in nature. Overall, it is clear that there are three primary stages in this process, beginning with water evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The next step shows the water‘s journey after falling to the ground, and the process ends with saltwater intrusion. At the first step of the process, water evaporates into the air, as a result of the sun’s heat. It is estimated that 80% of total water vapour is taken from the ocean. Following this, a cloud is formed by the condensation of water vapour. In the next stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. Water from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or is absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff, which is made from rainwater, creates the groundwater and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the process is saltwater intrusion, where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers.

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chart
 illustrates the circulation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in nature.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are three primary stages in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, beginning with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The next
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water‘s
 journey after falling to the ground, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 ends with saltwater intrusion.

At the first
 step of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 evaporates into the air, as a result
 of the sun’s heat. It is estimated
 that 80% of total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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vapour
is taken
 from the ocean. Following this, a cloud is formed
 by the condensation of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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vapour
.

In the next
 stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
Water
 from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or is absorbed
 into the ground. The surface runoff, which is made
 from rainwater, creates the groundwater and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 is saltwater intrusion, where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from the ocean This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 to the freshwater aquifers. 