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The diagram highlight about the water cycle. Summarize the information

The diagram highlight about the water cycle. brrwX
he chart illustrates the circulation of water in nature. Overall, it is clear that there are three primary stages in this process, beginning with water evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The next step shows the water‘s journey after falling to the ground, and the process ends with saltwater intrusion. At the first step of the process, water evaporates into the air, as a result of the sun’s heat. It is estimated that 80% of total water vapour is taken from the ocean. Following this, a cloud is formed by the condensation of water vapour. In the next stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. Water from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or is absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff, which is made from rainwater, creates the groundwater and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the process is saltwater intrusion, where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers.
he
chart
illustrates the circulation of
water
in nature.

Overall
, it is
clear
that there are three primary stages in this
process
, beginning with
water
evaporation and the formation of a cloud. The
next
step
shows
the
water‘s
journey after falling to the ground, and the
process
ends with saltwater intrusion.

At the
first
step of the
process
,
water
evaporates into the air,
as a result
of the sun’s heat. It
is estimated
that 80% of total
water
vapour
is taken
from the ocean. Following this, a cloud
is formed
by the condensation of
water
vapour
.

In the
next
stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow.
Water
from the precipitation partly pours into the lakes or
is absorbed
into the ground. The surface runoff, which
is made
from rainwater, creates the groundwater and then flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the
process
is saltwater intrusion, where
water
from the ocean
moves
to the freshwater aquifers.
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