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The graph below shows the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800 1900 and 2000

The graph below shows the town of Brindell and local areas in 1800 1900 and 2000 6xpkG
The three maps delineate how the town of Brindell and its surroundings had altered over three centuries from 1800 to 2000. Overall, the area of Brindell tremendously changed over the given period and transformed from an agricultural place to a residential and industrial hub. Initially, in 1800, the four areas were separated by river stour(which is in the center) and Brindell town was situated in the SouthWest of the river. There were two agricultural zones: farmland for crops and animals in North and East of Brindell respectively. A large chunk of the area was occupied by woodland at the NorthEast corner. In the following century, a few noticeable changes had taken place. Mainly, the entire grazing area had been converted into an industrial zone in the upper half while in the lower half, a new Bun Hill village was constructed. Moreover, in the following century, drastic changes can be observed in the area as Brindell town expanded in size (almost double). The farmland as well as the forest area had shrunk in size to make way for a new Bun Hill park. Also, many more industries were opened and the overall size of bun hill was augmented.
The three maps delineate how the town of
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Brindell
and its surroundings had altered over three centuries from 1800 to 2000.

Overall
, the
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area
of
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Brindell
tremendously
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changed
over the
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given
period and transformed from an agricultural place to a residential and industrial hub.

Initially
, in 1800, the four
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areas
were separated
by
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river stour
(which is in the center) and
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Brindell
town
was situated
in the
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SouthWest
of the river. There were two agricultural zones: farmland for crops and animals in North and East of
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Brindell
respectively
. A large chunk of the
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area
was occupied
by woodland at the
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NorthEast
corner. In the following century, a few noticeable
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changes
had taken place.
Mainly
, the entire grazing
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area
had
been converted
into an industrial zone in the upper half while in the lower half, a new Bun Hill village
was constructed
.

Moreover
, in the following century, drastic
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changes
can
be observed
in the
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area
as
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Brindell
town expanded in size (almost double). The farmland
as well
as the forest
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area
had shrunk in size to
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make
way for a new Bun Hill park.
Also
,
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many
more industries
were opened
and the
overall
size of bun hill
was augmented
.
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