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The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. r8enN
The Graph provides information on the total worth of exports between the year 2000 - 2005 by one country and illustrates the utility of fuel, food, and manufactured goods between the same years. Overall, the utility of exports doubled over the five-year period. Initially, the value of exports decreased gradually for the year 2001 and 2002 from 30000 to 25000 million dollars. However, over the following three years, the value increased drastically to 350000, 390000, and 430000 million dollars respectively. In regard to the value of selected exports, the export of fuel faced the continuous decline from $450000 million to $200000 million over the five-year period. The export of food mostly maintained its worth with slight fluctuation Despite the drastic decrease in the value of fuel. The export value of manufactured goods on the other hand increased from $160000 million to $250000 million in the initial two-year period and decreased significantly to $190000 million in the following year of 2003. However, the gradually increase was observed during the year of 2004, and 2005 in the value of manufactured goods.
The Graph provides information on the total worth of
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exports
between the
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year
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2000 - 2005
by one country and illustrates the utility of fuel, food, and manufactured
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goods
between the same years.

Overall
, the utility of
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exports
doubled over the five-year period.
Initially
, the
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value
of
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exports
decreased
gradually
for the
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year
2001 and 2002 from 30000 to 25000
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million
dollars.
However
, over the following three years, the
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value
increased
drastically
to 350000, 390000, and 430000
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million
dollars
respectively
.

In regard to the
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value
of selected
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exports
, the
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export
of fuel faced the continuous decline from $450000
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million
to $200000
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million
over the five-year period. The
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export
of food
mostly
maintained its worth with slight fluctuation Despite the drastic decrease in the
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value
of fuel. The
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export
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value
of manufactured
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goods
on the other hand
increased from $160000
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million
to $250000
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million
in the initial two-year period and decreased
significantly
to $190000
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million
in the following
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year
of 2003.
However
, the
gradually
increase
was observed
during the
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year
of 2004, and 2005 in the
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value
of manufactured
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goods
.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.

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