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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. XGPkg
The bar graph illustrates the number of people working part time in England, Wales, North Ireland and Scotland during 1980 and 2010. In general, the infographic demonstrates that there is a slightly increase of part-time workers from 1980 to 2010, except in Norther Ireland. Additionally, it is clear that Wales and England have a larger number of part-time workers than Scotland and Norther Ireland. According to the bar graph, England had 35% in 1980. Furthermore, Wales had sizable number of 32%. Both countries mentioned had a slightly increase in their percentage to 2010. In England, the amount of workers are 31% and in Wales reached 35%. As a resolution, these two countries mentioned have the greatest amount of this job variety. On the other hand, Scotland had the smallest quantity of part-time jobs in 1980, with 11%. Subsequently, it escalated dramatically to almost 20%. On the contrary, Norther Ireland presented a decline of part time workers, from 15% to 13%. As a resolution, Norther Ireland is only country to decreased their percentage.
The bar graph illustrates the number of
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people
working
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part time
in England, Wales, North Ireland and Scotland during 1980 and 2010.
In general
, the infographic demonstrates that there is a
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slightly increase
of part-time
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workers
from 1980 to 2010, except in Norther Ireland.
Additionally
, it is
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clear
that Wales and England have a larger number of part-time
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workers
than Scotland and Norther Ireland.

According to the bar graph, England had 35% in 1980.
Furthermore
, Wales had sizable number of 32%. Both countries mentioned had a
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slightly increase
in their percentage to 2010. In England, the amount of
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workers
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are
31% and in Wales reached 35%. As a resolution, these two countries mentioned have the greatest amount of this job variety.

On the other hand
, Scotland had the smallest quantity of part-time jobs in 1980, with 11%.
Subsequently
, it escalated
dramatically
to almost 20%.
On the contrary
, Norther Ireland presented a decline of
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part time
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workers
, from 15% to 13%. As a resolution, Norther Ireland is
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only
country to decreased their percentage.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

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