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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. XGPkg

The bar graph illustrates the number of people working part time in England, Wales, North Ireland and Scotland during 1980 and 2010. In general, the infographic demonstrates that there is a slightly increase of part-time workers from 1980 to 2010, except in Norther Ireland. Additionally, it is clear that Wales and England have a larger number of part-time workers than Scotland and Norther Ireland. According to the bar graph, England had 35% in 1980. Furthermore, Wales had sizable number of 32%. Both countries mentioned had a slightly increase in their percentage to 2010. In England, the amount of workers are 31% and in Wales reached 35%. As a resolution, these two countries mentioned have the greatest amount of this job variety. On the other hand, Scotland had the smallest quantity of part-time jobs in 1980, with 11%. Subsequently, it escalated dramatically to almost 20%. On the contrary, Norther Ireland presented a decline of part time workers, from 15% to 13%. As a resolution, Norther Ireland is only country to decreased their percentage.

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 in England, Wales, North Ireland and Scotland during 1980 and 2010. In general
, the infographic demonstrates that there is a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
slightly increase
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workers
 from 1980 to 2010, except in Norther Ireland. Additionally
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 that Wales and England have a larger number of part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
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 than Scotland and Norther Ireland.

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, Wales had sizable number of 32%. Both countries mentioned had a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
slightly increase
 in their percentage to 2010. In England, the amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemployeetraderpeasantlaborer
workers
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 31% and in Wales reached 35%. As a resolution, these two countries mentioned have the greatest amount of this job variety.

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, Scotland had the smallest quantity of part-time jobs in 1980, with 11%. Subsequently
, it escalated dramatically
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, from 15% to 13%. As a resolution, Norther Ireland is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 country to decreased their percentage. 