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The graph below shows the total number of people who visited Caribbean islands in 2010 and 2017. Overall, the massive amount of visitors chosen spend their vacation on the cruise ship. Therefore, total amount of tourists on the island is less

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The graph below shows the total number of people who visited Caribbean islands in 2010 and 2017. Overall, the massive amount of visitors chosen spend their vacation on the cruise ship. Therefore, the total amount of tourists on the island is less. In detail, Most of the visitors of the island in seven years lived on the cruise ship: in 2000, precisely one million of the tourist resided on the ship, and in 2015 this ratio was 2. 5. After this year, the amount slightly jumped further in 2016 and remained the same in 2017. By the end of 2017, the number of visitors staying on the ship was reported to be 3. 5 million, double the ratio of the year 2000. Furthermore, the total amount of tourists on the island was fewer than the total ratio of visitors on the cruise ship; in 2000, the total rate of tourism on the island was less than half of the million. Then after seven years, the island recorded a total 2 million of tourists, out of which 1 million stayed on the island
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