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The given line graph and bar graph display the information regarding travel

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The given line graph and bar graph display the information regarding travel to and from UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. The first graph gives the travel data to and from UK between the years 1979 to 1999. From the year 1979 the international travel in UK grew steadily. In 1979 there were about 10 million visits to UK by overseas residents. This number was around 30 million by 1999. Also 14 million visits abroad were made by UK residents in 1979 and that number grew to above 50 million in 1999. The bar graph shows the most popular countries to visit by UK residents in the year 1999. France with more than 10 million travellers was the most popular while Spain with nearly 10 million was not far behind. The other top choices were USA, Greece and Turkey. The graphs show that UK residents were more prone to international travel as compared to the overseas residents and also that other European countries were more preferred by UK residents to travel and visit.
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display the information regarding
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travel
to and from UK and about the most popular countries for UK
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residents
to visit.

The
first
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graph
gives the
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travel
data to and from UK between the years 1979 to 1999. From the year 1979 the international
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travel
in UK grew
steadily
. In 1979 there were about 10
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million
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visits
to UK by overseas
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residents
. This number was around 30
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million
by 1999.
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Also
14
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million
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visits
abroad
were made
by UK
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residents
in 1979 and that number grew to above 50
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million
in 1999.

The bar
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graph
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shows
the most popular countries to
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visit
by UK
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residents
in the year 1999. France with more than 10
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million
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travellers
was the most popular while Spain with
nearly
10
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was not far behind. The other top choices were USA, Greece and Turkey.

The
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graphs
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show
that UK
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residents
were more prone to international
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travel
as compared to the overseas
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residents
and
also
that other European countries were more preferred by UK
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residents
to
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travel
and
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visit
.
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IELTS academic The given line graph and bar graph display the information regarding travel

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