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The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Gmrj
The given line graph compares the sales of three different books namely children's books, adult fiction, and educational books in particular nation from 2002 to 2006. Overall, it is immediately clear that educational books and children's books showed an upward trend, while that of adult fiction decreased over the period shown. Interestingly, selling fiction book was on top in 2002, after four years this figure was the lowest position. Initially, the sale for fiction book was 45 million dollars in 2002. After this figure decreased slightly to 40 in 2004, it fell significantly to 30 in 2006, sinking the low of the graph. With regard to the sales of children's books and educational books, they started at about 33 and 25 million dollars in 2002, respectively. After that, they rose rapidly to 42 million dollars and 32 million dollars in 2003, in order. However, a period from 2003 to 2005, saw a very slightly growth of 3 million dollars from 42 million dollars to 45 million dollars in sales of children's books but after 2005, this figure grew considerably and reached an all time high of 56 million dollars. In contrast, there was a sharp drop of 6 million dollars from 32 to 26 million dollars in sales of educational books between 2003 and 2005, at which point it climbed steeply to 33 million dollars in 2006.
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nation from 2002 to 2006.

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an upward trend, while that of adult
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decreased over the period shown.
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was on top in 2002, after four years this figure was the lowest position.

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in 2002. After this figure decreased
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high of 56
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from 32 to 26
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between 2003 and 2005, at which point it climbed
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in 2006.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the sales of children’s books, adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006. Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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