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The chart below shows three different types of crime in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.

The chart below shows three different types of crime in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005. 31Md

The rendered line chart depicts the information about three kinds of offence namely- Car theft, House burglary and street robbery in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005. As illustrated, car theft started from 0. 4 in 1970 and inclined to 0. 8 in 1980. However, it revealed gradual rise in next decade by 0. 2. Surpisingly, it had declined markedly to 1. 4 and 1. 2 in 2000 and 2005 respectively. Moving further to house burglary, value was commenced with 0. 2 in 1970 and resulted into continuous increase upto next decade with 0. 6. Although house burglary was constant in next five years but surged to 0. 7 in 1990. Also, it decreased in last years to 0. 5. Moreover, street robbery was remained constant in first two decades and then gone up to 0. 2 in 1995, nevertheless, shown no variation in final years. Overall, despite having some fluctuations, car theft showed an upward trend. Following this, house burglary and street robbery had also shown an upward trend with low values.

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burglary
 and street robbery in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

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burglary
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house
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burglary
 and street robbery had also
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