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The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and give comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050. 5nLA
The given line graph compares the Birth Rate and the Death Rate from 1950 onwards and also gives projections upto 2050. It is clear from a cursory glance at the graph that the Birth and Death Rates have been almost similar except for the 1970s when the birth rate was much more than the Death Rate. In 1950, the number of births in this country was roughly 750, 000. After that the population of the newly born rose sharply and peaked at 1000000 in the 1970s. Then it dropped sharply to reach an all time low of a little under 600000 in the 1990s. From then on the birth rate picked up again and has reached approximately 700, 000 and is predicted to remain stable till 2050. The Death Rate has been fairly stable at around 0. 7 million. It is expected to remain constant till 2030, after which it is forecast to rise and reach the 0. 8 million mark by 2050. Overall, the Birth Rate experienced fluctuations in the past, while the Death Rate remained stable. The Birth Rate is expected to remain stable after 2030, but the Death Rate is predicted to rise moderately till 2050.
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and the Death
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from 1950 onwards and
also
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upto
2050. It is
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from a cursory glance at the graph that the
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and Death
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have been almost similar
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except for
the 1970s when the
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birth
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rate
was much more than the Death Rate.

In 1950, the number of
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births
in this country was roughly 750, 000. After that the population of the
newly
born rose
sharply
and peaked at 1000000 in the 1970s. Then it dropped
sharply
to reach an
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low of a
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under 600000 in the 1990s. From then on the
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birth
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rate
picked up again and has reached approximately 700, 000 and
is predicted
to remain
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stable
till 2050.

The Death
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Rate
has been
fairly
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stable
at around 0. 7 million. It is
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expected
to remain constant till 2030, after which it is forecast to rise and reach the 0. 8 million mark by 2050.

Overall
, the
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Birth
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Rate
experienced fluctuations in the past, while the Death
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remained
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stable
. The
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Birth
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is
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to remain
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stable
after 2030,
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the Death
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Rate
is predicted
to rise
moderately
till 2050.

IELTS academic The graph below shows the total births and the deaths in a European country from 1950 to 2050.

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