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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. 2W6o
The table provided gives information on the underground railway systems in terms of the routes covered, passengers travelling annually and the year the railway system was initiated. The indicated information in the table is for six cities. As per the table, the oldest underground railway service provider is in London and also covers the longest rail routes (1863 and 394 km of routes). On the other hand, Los Angeles is the latest as it opened in 2001 and covers the second least railway route of 28 km. Furthermore, Tokyo railway service initiated in 1927 but consists the largest number of travellers (1927 passengers) among all other six cities, while It is Kyoto that consists of the least number of travellers (45 passengers). Overall, two of the oldest systems are London and Paris but it is Paris and Tokyo that has a large number of passengers travelling annually; meanwhile, it is London that has the largest route travelled (394 km).
The table provided gives information on the underground
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systems in terms of the
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routes
covered, passengers travelling
annually
and the year the
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railway
system
was initiated
. The indicated information in the table is for six cities.

As per the table, the oldest underground
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service provider is in London and
also
covers the longest rail
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routes
(1863 and 394 km of
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.
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, Los Angeles is the latest as it opened in 2001 and covers the second least
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railway
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route
of 28 km.

Furthermore
, Tokyo
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service initiated in 1927
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consists the largest number of
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travellers
(1927 passengers) among all other six cities, while It is Kyoto that consists of the least number of
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travellers
(45 passengers).

Overall
, two of the oldest systems are London and Paris
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it is Paris and Tokyo that has
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a large number of
passengers travelling
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; meanwhile, it is London that has the largest
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route
travelled (394 km).
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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