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The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.

The line graph gives information about the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995. Overall, There was a significant increase between 1989 and 1990. Turning to the details, there was a slight rise of around 55 people from 1985 for three years. In 1988, there had been a decline of about 48 number of people. However, the flu went up in 1991, there was a slow growth of over 75 number of people. While the figure dropped significantly 60 number of people until 1993. In 1994, the number increased gradually for a short time, but, eventually, there had been a gradual climbing of 60 number of people in 1995.
The line graph gives information about the reported
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of cases of influenza in
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over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.

Overall
, There was a significant increase between 1989 and 1990.

Turning to the
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, there was a slight rise of around 55
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people
from 1985 for three years. In 1988, there had been a decline of about 48
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number
of
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people
.
However
, the flu went up in 1991, there was a slow growth of over 75
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of
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. While the figure dropped
significantly
60
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of
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until 1993. In 1994, the
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increased
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,
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, there had been a gradual climbing of 60
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in 1995.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.

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3 paragraphs
123 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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