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The charts below shows the consumption of water for different purposes in Austraila and the residential water use in Australia in 2004.

The utilized of water for various purposes in a particular nation and the household water used in Australia in 2004 is depicted by blend of pie chart and bar graph. At a fleeting glance, the 11% of water was consumed in Australia by industry purpose, less than a tiny proportion of water which was observed in a particular country for other factors. Furthermore, the water which was used for business and other factors 10% and 13%, respectively. In 2004, just over half percentage of water utilized for residential works.
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for various purposes in a particular nation and the household
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in Australia in 2004
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by blend of pie chart and bar graph.

At a fleeting glance, the 11% of
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water
was consumed
in Australia by industry purpose, less than a tiny proportion of
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which
was observed
in a particular country for other factors.
Furthermore
, the
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water
which was
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used
for business and other factors 10% and 13%,
respectively
. In 2004,
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over half percentage of
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utilized for residential works.

IELTS academic The charts below shows the consumption of water for different purposes in Austraila and the residential water use in Australia in 2004.

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