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Below tables are the use of water by four different countries. Make summaries by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table chart illustrates the information about water use in four countries. There are 82 of water spend on Agriculture, which is the largest part of water consuming in Egypt. While the figure of water using in industry filed and Domestic only 12 and 10 respectively. By contrast, only 10 of water is due to crops in Canada, but the biggest quantity of water utilization is in factory or manufacturing, which account for 70. However, the water is used on domestic living is minimal occupy, only 6. The number of Agriculture water use is almost twice more than Industry which are 64 and 30 in Saudi Arabia. New Zealand use nearly the same amount of water on crops(46) and Industry(44) and just 8 of water is spent on living. Overall, in the four countries, the most of water is used on farming except Canada. Moreover, the water for living accounts practically the least proportion.
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spend on Agriculture, which is the largest part of
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consuming in Egypt. While the figure of
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utilization is in factory or manufacturing, which account for 70.
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on domestic living is minimal
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is almost twice more than Industry which are 64 and 30 in Saudi Arabia. New Zealand
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on crops(46) and Industry(44) and
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on farming except Canada.
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IELTS academic Below tables are the use of water by four different countries. Make summaries by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

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