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The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the consumption and production of coffee. Also, the distribution of profits in different countries and continents. Overall, Europe ranks first in coffee consumption among the Americas, Japan and other parts of the world, while South Africa is ahead of Indonesia, Vietnam and Japan in terms of coffee production. In terms of coffee consumption, Europe was 2 per cent better than America, but Japan had only 8 per cent of the population consuming coffee. While other parts of the world accounted for 12 per cent of coffee consumption. South Africa had the highest percentage of coffee production and was highlighted in blue but Indonesia was 22 per cent behind Africa. Nevertheless, Vietnam ranked last in terms of coffee production, while the Japanese produced 18% of coffee. Delivery accounted for 51 per cent of the profit distribution. Also, retailers lagged behind 27 per cent of coffee delivery. However, manufacturers were 5 points ahead of exporters. In addition, exporters were the worst in the distribution of profits and marked in green.
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among the Americas, Japan and other parts of the world, while South Africa is ahead of Indonesia, Vietnam and Japan in terms of
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production.

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. South Africa had the highest percentage of
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production and
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Indonesia was 22 per cent behind Africa.
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production, while the Japanese produced 18% of
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. Delivery accounted for 51 per cent of the profit distribution.
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delivery.
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, manufacturers were 5 points ahead of exporters.
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, exporters were the worst in the distribution of profits and marked in green.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.

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