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The graph below shows the rate of smoking pre 1000 people in Someland from1960 to 2000

The graph below shows the rate of smoking pre 1000 people in Someland from1960 to 2000 0AMVB
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the rate of smoking pre 1000 people in Someland from1960 to 2000

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