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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. xm0Gw
We have provided with two diagrams which illustrate the blueprint of a Wave-energy Instrument and its positions. In general, we have a picture showing the plan of the Wave energy Machine, which go through some steps to provide enegry and on other hand another image shows what is the best postion to place the machine. To start with Wave Instrument, The electicity generator will be placed in the water allowing waves to enter it. As the water level increasing the air flow from the bottom level will pass through turbines and will out through chambers. Simunteniously on the other phase the air flow from the outer surface through the inlet and rotate the turbine and pass inside the water through chambers. When it comes to the placing the machine, when the instrument installed near to the shore, it will cost low but the output amount will be low due to small waves. Whereas, it is vice versa if we install it in middle. The installantion cost will be high and the output will also be high due to high waves.
We have provided with two diagrams which illustrate the blueprint of a Wave-energy Instrument and its positions.

In general
, we have a picture showing the plan of the
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Wave
energy Machine, which go
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enegry
and on other hand another image
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postion
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generator will
be placed
in the water allowing
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waves
to enter it. As the water level increasing the air flow from the bottom level will pass
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through
turbines and will out
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through
chambers.
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Simunteniously
on the other phase the air flow from the outer surface
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through
the inlet and rotate the turbine and pass inside the water
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through
chambers.

When it
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comes
to the placing the machine, when the instrument installed near to the shore, it will cost low
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the output amount will be low due to
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small
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waves
. Whereas, it is vice versa if we install it in middle. The
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installantion
cost will be high and the output will
also
be high due to high
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waves
.
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