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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport qjoE
The line graph illustrate information about how many goods delivired in the United Kingdom by road, water, rail and pipeline. Overall it is clear to see that while all forms of transport saw an upward trend in the amount of good delivery those delivered by rail did not see any essential growth. Obviously in 1974 delivering goods by road was the most popular choice during the period, with around 70 million tonnes of goods supplied by this mode of transport. There wasa steady rise in total amount of goods, despite fluctuation and reached about 100million tonnes by 2002. The next similar trend, the figure climb to just under 60million in 1982, after which it was declined and then again growth about 60million tonnes in 2002 At the same time the pipeline was lowest although it rose from 3million tonnes to 21million during the period. Finally, the amount of goods delivered by railway system fell 25 million tonnes in 1994 and rose sharply to 40 million tonnes in 2002
The line graph illustrate information about how
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delivired
in the United Kingdom by road, water, rail and pipeline.
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that while all forms of transport
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an upward trend in the amount of
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delivery those delivered by rail did not
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any essential growth.

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in 1974 delivering
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by road was the most popular choice during the period, with around 70
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million
tonnes of
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goods
supplied by this mode of transport. There
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wasa
steady rise in total amount of
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, despite fluctuation and reached about
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100million
tonnes by 2002. The
next
similar trend, the figure climb to
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60million
in 1982, after which it
was declined
and then again growth about
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60million
tonnes in 2002

At the same time the pipeline was lowest although it rose from
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3million
tonnes to
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21million
during the period.

Finally
, the amount of
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delivered by railway system fell 25
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tonnes in 1994 and rose
sharply
to 40
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tonnes in 2002
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

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