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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. 67Jr

The bar chart illustrates how many adults were attending part-time and full-time education in the country Britain in terms of three time periods(1970-77, 1980-81, 1990-91). Overall, the male students were fewer than female students in part-time education compared to full-time education in given time periods. In full-time education, both students of both genders were very low. firstly, considering part-time education male students were 1 million in a year from 1970-71. which is reduced and raised again at the end of the period, to a certain level though lower than a billion number of students. whereas female students followed an upward trend throughout the 3 time periods from around 700 thousand to more than a million at the end id the period. however, the in full-time education, the male adults had a strike from the year 1970 to the year 1991. on the other hand female students were only 50, 000 in the intial period inwhich it raised to more than 200, 000 in 1991.

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periods(1970-77
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education
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