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The graph below shows the people of Scotland visited the Edinburgh attractions from 1980 to 2010.

The graph below shows the people of Scotland visited the Edinburgh attractions from 1980 to 2010. QGe1

The line graph depicts the percentage rate of Scotland people visited Edinburgh attractions namely, aquarium, castle, zoo and for festival in between 1980 and 2010. Observing the details, in 1980, 10% of Scotland citizens visited the zoo. After that, this figure experienced a fluctuation zone till 2000 and then in the following decade, it increased gradually by 20% in 2010. The percentage number of aquarium started from 20% and in the following 5 years, there was a rapid growth noted and accounted for almost 35% in 1985. However, this ratio decreased dramatically till 1990 and after that, it declined moderately and stood at less than 10% in 2010. Furthermore, approximately 25% Scotland people arrived in Edinburgh for the visiting of castle in 1980; while, the rate of visitors peaked at 45% in 1995. But then, the number of tourists had dropped and in the end of the period only 30% visitors noted. The rate of festival visitors remained almost steady during the given period of time. Overall, the percentage rate of Scotland visitors for zoo followed fluctuated trend; whereas, aquarium and castle tourists decreased in trend in the given period of time.

The line graph depicts the percentage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of Scotland This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 visited Edinburgh attractions namely
, aquarium, castle, zoo and for festival in between 1980 and 2010.

Observing the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, in 1980, 10% of Scotland citizens visited the zoo. After that, this figure experienced a fluctuation zone till 2000 and then in the following decade, it increased gradually
 by 20% in 2010. The percentage number of aquarium This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 from 20% and in the following 5 years, there was a rapid growth noted and accounted for almost 35% in 1985. However
, this ratio decreased dramatically
 till 1990 and after that, it declined moderately
 and stood at less than 10% in 2010.

Furthermore
, approximately 25% Scotland This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 arrived in Edinburgh for the visiting of castle in 1980; while, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 peaked at 45% in 1995. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 then, the number of tourists had dropped and in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 30% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 noted. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of festival You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 remained almost steady during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period of time.

Overall
, the percentage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
 of Scotland You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcompanycallerforeignerguest
visitors
 for zoo followed fluctuated trend; whereas, aquarium and castle tourists decreased in trend in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period of time. 