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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisoncomparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. OGgE
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the population more than age of 65 in three different countries from 1940 to 2040. Overall, Japan is the highest percentage in proportion of population more than age of 65 and USA is the lowest percentage in proportion of population more than age of 65. Whereas sweden is the middle percentage rates between Japan and USA. In1940, japan is the 5% of proportion population to decrease to around 3. 5% but same as constant by 1980. However, in 1980 around 3. 5% proportion of population to the steadily increase 5% upto since 2000. In 2020, japan steadily increased more 5% total 10% in around since 2025. Japan is upto since 2040 around 27 % is the highest percentage in proportion of population. In 1940 USA is the around 9% in the percentage of proportion of population more than age of 65. However, japan is the steadily increase to the 20years period upto since 1980. However, USA is the decrease slowly but then after increased around 15 % in 2020. Whereas USA is upto the 24% since 2040. Sweden is the steadily increase to the 14 % in 1980 then slowly decrease but after steadily increase to the more than 25% in since 2040.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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