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The three charts given reveal the average percentage in typical meals of nutrients types such sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in the USA.

The three charts given reveal the average percentage in typical meals of nutrients types such sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in the USA. BDMj
The three charts given reveal the average percentage in typical meals of nutrients types such sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in the USA. Overall, the percentage of dinner was the highest of typical meals. And those of snacks as the highest meals in the added sugar, otherwise, as the lowest in the sodium nutrients. The typical meals of snacks and breakfast consumed in the sodium nutrients in 14%, and those in the saturated fat experienced a snacks at 21% and breakfast 16%. In addition, the added sugar in the breakfast showed same number with saturated fat, and 42% of snacks. On the other hand, the percentage of lunch and dinner consumed in the sodium and saturated fat, it saw 43% and 29% and that 37% and 26%, respectively. However, in the added sugar withnessed 23% of breakfast, and lowest of level in the dinner consumed at 19%.
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of nutrients types such sodium,
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, as the lowest in the sodium nutrients.

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of snacks and
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in the sodium nutrients in 14%, and those in the
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at 21% and
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16%.
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, and 42% of snacks.

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43% and 29% and that 37% and 26%,
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23% of
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at 19%.
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IELTS academic The three charts given reveal the average percentage in typical meals of nutrients types such sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar consumed in the USA.

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