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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. KEWR
The comparison of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar percentages in typical meals consumed in the USA is illustrated by the pie charts. Overall, sodium and saturated fat become the higest percentage in the composition of the dinner's meal. By contrast, added sugar becomes the higest percentage in the proportion of snacks. In the dinner's meal, the sodium rate become the higest percentage by 43%, compared to saturated fat and added sugar obtaining 37% and 23% respectively. However, in the snacks, the added sugar rate become the higest percentages by 42%, followed by saturated fat and sodium obtaining 21% and 14% respectively In the lunch's meal, the sodium rate become the higest percentage by 29%, compared to saturated fat and added sugar obtaining 26% and 19% respectively. Nonetheless, in the breakfast's meal, the added sugar and saturated fat rates obtain the same percentage by 16%, and the sodium rate reachs only 14%.
The comparison of sodium,
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saturated
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, and
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added
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sugar
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percentages
in typical
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meals
consumed in the USA
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by the pie charts.

Overall
, sodium and
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higest
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in the composition of the dinner's
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meal
. By contrast,
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added
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sugar
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becomes
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higest
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percentage
in the proportion of snacks.

In the dinner's
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, the sodium
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rate
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become
the
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higest
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percentage
by 43%, compared to
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saturated
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fat
and
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added
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sugar
obtaining 37% and 23%
respectively
.
However
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added
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sugar
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rate
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become
the
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higest
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by 42%, followed by
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saturated
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fat
and sodium obtaining 21% and 14%
respectively


In the lunch's
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, the sodium
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the
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higest
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percentage
by 29%, compared to
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saturated
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fat
and
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added
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sugar
obtaining 26% and 19%
respectively
. Nonetheless, in the breakfast's
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, the
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added
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and
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saturated
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fat
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rates
obtain the same
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by 16%, and the sodium
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rate
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