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The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U. S. from 1960 to 2011. J2pa
The graph illustrates waste recycling rates in the USA from 1960 to 2011. It shows how much garbage recycling in tons and the percentage of it. Overall, it can be seen that, litter recycling in USA after 1985 increased remarkably despite the big proportion of litter still have not been reused. Between the year in 1960 and 1970, the amount of waste was recycled almost stand as a constant where is at just over 6%. However, in 1985 more that 14 tons of garbage was recycled and it was tripled the amount of waste mass during the same period. In addition the percent recycling over total weight developed by nearly 2% after 5 years.
The graph illustrates waste
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recycling
rates in the USA from 1960 to 2011. It
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shows
how much garbage
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recycling
in tons and the percentage of it.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, litter
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recycling
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in USA
after 1985 increased
remarkably
despite the
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big
proportion of litter
still
have not
been reused
.

Between the year in 1960 and 1970, the amount of waste
was recycled
almost stand as a constant where is at
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just
over 6%.
However
, in 1985 more that 14 tons of garbage
was recycled
and it
was tripled
the amount of waste mass during the same period. In
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addition
the percent
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recycling
over total weight developed by
nearly
2% after 5 years.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U. S. from 1960 to 2011.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
114 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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