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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. JaEe
The line graph illustrates the recycling rate for paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics between 1982 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the higherproportion wasshown by paper and cardboard, while least was plastics thatwere recycled throughout the given period. Moreover, all the four materials depicts various fluctuations and experienced an upward trend. In 1982, around 65% paper and cardboard (being highest) and 50% glass containers were recycled in a particular country. The figure of paper and cardboard slightly increased to 70% in 1986 which was then decreased and again reach at same proportion as 1982 in 1990. During 1990 and 1994, this rate again rose by around 15% and reach at its peak (below 90%). From 1994, it significantly fall to 70% in 2010. Furthermore, recycling rate of glass containerals fell by one tenth proportion in 1990. Afterwards, this proportion significantly increase to 60% at the end of the period. On the other hand, both aluminium and plastic material show marginal rate of recycling rate, that is below one tenth. While, the recycling rate of aluminium dramatically rose by almost 40% to 45% in 2010, plastics does not show any significant change and reach to approximately 9% in 2010.
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for paper and cardboard, glass containers,

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cans and
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plastics
between 1982 and 2010.

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by paper and cardboard, while least was
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period.

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, all the four materials depicts various fluctuations and experienced an upward trend. In 1982, around 65% paper and cardboard (being highest) and 50% glass containers
were recycled
in a particular country. The figure of paper and cardboard
slightly
increased to 70% in 1986 which was then decreased and again reach at same proportion as 1982 in 1990. During 1990 and 1994, this
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rate
again rose by around 15% and reach at its peak (below 90%). From 1994, it
significantly
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to 70% in 2010.
Furthermore
,
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rate
of glass
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containerals
fell by one tenth proportion in 1990. Afterwards, this proportion
significantly
increase to 60% at the
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end
of the period.

On the other hand
, both
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aluminium
and
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plastic
material
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marginal
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rate
of
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,
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below one tenth. While, the
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of
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dramatically
rose by almost 40% to 45% in 2010,
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plastics
does not
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any significant
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and reach to approximately 9% in 2010.
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