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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave 'very good' rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave 'very good' rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. b7dP
The given table chart illustrates the proportion of first year students who gave satisfaction rating to the resoures offered by the college for economics, law and commerce. From the overall analysis, it is clear that the resources provided by commerce are the highest 'very good' rating among the given courses. Whereas, the less percentage of economic students give to pre-course information. To begin with, the percentage of commerce students satisfied by pre- course information, teaching and tutor is observed almost same with 95%. While, the students of commerce stream who fully satisfied from print resources and other resources accounted for 86% and 81% respectively. Moreover, with regard to the students of law stream, 80% students from other resources, 72% from pre-course information, 62% for teaching and 76% from tutor. Turning to the economics stream, approximately equivalent students satisfied from tutor and teaching by 90% to 95%. Meanwhile, almost equal percentage of girst year students who gave 'very good' rating to the pre-course information and other resources for economic course.
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economics
, law and
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commerce
. From the
overall
analysis, it is
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that the resources provided by
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commerce
are the highest '
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very
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good
' rating among the
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economic
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pre-course
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information
. To
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commerce
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students
satisfied by
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, teaching and tutor
is observed
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students
of
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commerce
stream who
fully
satisfied from print resources and other resources accounted for 86% and 81%
respectively
.
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of law stream, 80%
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students
from other resources, 72% from
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pre-course
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, 62% for teaching and 76% from tutor. Turning to the
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economics
stream, approximately equivalent
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satisfied from tutor and teaching by 90% to 95%. Meanwhile, almost equal percentage of
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave 'very good' rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

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