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The graph below shows the percentages of population living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries from 1970 to 2030.

The graph below shows the percentages of population living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries from 1970 to 2030. BMDqm
The given line chart illustrates the percentage of the population in the cities among four different nations, namely the USA, South Korea, India and China since 1970, and forecast trends until 2030. Overall, it is salient that there were upward trends in all four countries and they are expected to reach the highest percentages in 2030. More specifically, the USA experienced a stable trend from approximately 75% in 1970 to just over 80% in the estimated 2030, remaining to occupy the first position in the given years. South Korea, on the other hand, saw significant growth in the population from 1970, started at 40% in the beginning, drastically mounted to nearly 80%, and has presented a fairly identical figure with the USA since 2010. Last but equally crucial, it is striking that there is a statistical intersection between India and China at roughly 25% in around 2000. India fluctuates between 20% and 40% over the period given. In stark contrast, however, China observed a slight increase, eventually replacing the proportion of India, being likely to reach 40% in the future.
The
given
line chart illustrates the percentage of the population in the cities among four
different
nations,
namely
the USA, South Korea, India and China since 1970, and forecast trends until 2030.

Overall
, it is salient that there were upward trends in all four
countries and
they are
expected
to reach the highest percentages in 2030.

More
specifically
, the USA experienced a stable trend from approximately 75% in 1970 to
just
over 80% in the estimated 2030, remaining to occupy the
first
position in the
given
years. South Korea,
on the other hand
,
saw
significant growth in the population from 1970,
started
at 40% in the beginning,
drastically
mounted to
nearly
80%, and has presented a
fairly
identical figure with the USA since 2010.

Last
but
equally
crucial, it is striking that there is a statistical intersection between India and China at roughly 25% in around 2000. India fluctuates between 20% and 40% over the period
given
. In stark contrast,
however
, China observed a slight increase,
eventually
replacing the proportion of India, being likely to reach 40% in the future.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentages of population living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries from 1970 to 2030.

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