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The table below provides information about the oil production in different countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information below and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below provides information about the oil production in different countries from 2000 to 2004. NVEPj
The table gives information about the amount of oil produced in 4 countries between 2000 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen from the table that the figure for oil production in Nigeria from 2000 to 2004 was the highest and that in Chad was the lowest. Between 2000 and 2004, the three countries, except for Congo, experienced/saw an increase in oil production. The oil production in Nigeria fluctuated within 5 years. It hit the bottom at 1. 900. 000 in 2002 then increased again, reaching 2. 300. 000 in 2004. The oil production in Chad was the lowest during 5 years and this figure was zero between 2000 and 2002, then went up to 15. 000 and 50. 000 in 2003 and 2004 respectively. The oil production in Somalia declined from 8. 000 in 2000 to 7. 000 in 2001. That in 2002 increased by 8. 000, after that, Somalia'sthe Somalia's oil in 2003 and 2004 rose dramatically 40. 000 and 55. 000 respectively. The Congo was the only country whose oil production decreased from 270, 000 in 2000 to 200. 000 in 2004.
The table gives information about the amount of
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produced in 4 countries between 2000 and 2004.

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, it can be
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from the table that the figure for
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oil
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in Nigeria from 2000 to 2004 was the highest and that in Chad was the lowest.

Between 2000 and 2004, the three countries,
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Congo, experienced/
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saw
an increase in
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oil
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. The
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in Nigeria fluctuated within 5 years. It hit the bottom at 1. 900. 000 in 2002 then increased again, reaching 2. 300. 000 in 2004. The
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oil
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in Chad was the lowest during 5 years and this figure was zero between 2000 and 2002, then went up to 15. 000 and 50. 000 in 2003 and 2004
respectively
. The
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in Somalia declined from 8. 000 in 2000 to 7. 000 in 2001. That in 2002 increased by 8. 000, after that, Somalia'
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Somalia's
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in 2003 and 2004 rose
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40. 000 and 55.
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000
respectively
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The Congo was the
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decreased from 270, 000 in 2000 to 200. 000 in 2004.
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IELTS academic The table below provides information about the oil production in different countries from 2000 to 2004.

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