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Survey of Library Users (2012)

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The table illustrate the information about a survey on the library users of three age groups in 2012. Overall, it can be seen that library use and librarian support decreased by age groups in 2012 in contrast the library importance of the library followed a declining trend across different age groups. Looking it details, 16-17 aged people used the library the most and they think library is important. Interestingly they search least help from the library. On the other hand between the 18-24 and 25-29 consider the library to be important, the first 65% and the second 74%. People between the ages of 18-24 and 25-29 used the library and receive help from the library at both ages at around 58 percent. But between the ages of 25-29 got help from librarian the lowest level at 19%

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 from librarian the lowest level at 19%