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the graph below shows the percentage pf people unemployed in the total labour workforce across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004

the graph below shows the percentage pf people unemployed in the total labour workforce across 9 countries in 1994 and 2004 GJMaB

The chart compares the proportion of jobless people in 9 countries, namely Ireland, Poland, Italy, Canada, The UK, Germany, The USA, Australia, and Japan, during 10 years from 1994 to 2004. Overall, all countries have a rate change after 10 years and all had rates below 10% in 2004 except Poland. As can be seen from the table, It is surprising that in 1994, Ireland ranked first in the unemployment rate with more than 14. 8%, but after 10 years, this rate has decreased to only 4. 4% and is excellently becoming the country with the lowest unemployment rate. Some countries have slightly decreased rates such as Italy, Canada, and The USA, namely from 11. 8% to 8. 4%, 10. 6% to 7. 7%, and 7. 2% to 5. 4% respectively. In addition, The UK decline sharply from 9. 5% to only 4. 7% in 2004. On the contrary, there are some countries that tend to increase the unemployment rate. Among the 9 countries, Poland grow significantly from 12. 4% in 1994 to 19%, holding the top position in the unemployment rate table in 2004. The remaining countries also had relatively high growth such as Germany increased from 7% to 9. 4%, Australia increased from 5% to 5. 4%, Japan increased from 2. 7% to 4. 7%. Although Australia and Japan have increased rates, compared to other countries, the number of unemployed people in these two countries is still quite low.

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